Critique: Portfolio Starters

I am really excited to put my portfolio together in the next couple of weeks. I got a lot of great feedback when we brought in our clips the other day in class. I appreciate your suggestions! Here are some of the things I brought in. A lot of my designs will undergo some revisions. There were a few where I just needed to tighten up some of the technical aspects of my design (i.e. font size, paragraph style, headings, etc.) I will also be adding a few clips next week because I am currently working on the burger cover designs and the After Dark iPad design. Here's what I had in class the other day.